James Smart

Animal empathy writing exercise

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Writing with empathy is all about inhabiting the shoes (or paws) of something that is not yourself. In this exercise, we ask participants to imagine the perspective of a fox and then write from the point of view of the fox.

Goal

Learn to write with empathy using the five senses and hopefully develop empathy for the non-human! 

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    Instructions

    Writing with empathy is all about inhabiting the shoes (or paws) of something that is not yourself. In this exercise, we ask participants to imagine the perspective of a fox and then write from the foxes point of view. 

    Step 1

    First, show the group this video of a fox frolicking in the snow - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D2SoGHFM18I

    Ask them to make notes about what they notice while they watch if they wish.

    After the video, give participants a minute or two on each of the following prompts and ask them to write down as many things as they can think of for each:
    • What is the fox thinking?
    • What does the fox want?
    • What can the fox see? 
    • What can the fox hear? 
    • What can the fox feel? 
    • What can the fox smell? 
    • What can the fox taste?
    • Lastly, ask them to give the fox a name!

    When your done, ask the group to share something from each category - I tend to solicit open responses and take one or two from each category.


    Step 2

    Next, we'll ask participants to write a story from the perspective the fox using the details they've collected above. Ask them to focus on what it must feel like to be a focus and to try to bring that out in their story.  

    Writing prompts

    Say the first prompt and then give the group 5 minutes to free-write using this sentence to start. Let everyone know they have 30 seconds left, then ask them to write down the second sentence and continue for another 5 minutes. Repeat for the final prompt.

    1. When the fox woke in their den, it felt...
    2. The fox had a special way of finding food ...
    3. But the fox was afraid of something...

    You can choose a first person variant on the sentences if the group needs a little more direction. (ie When I woke in my den, I felt...)

    Tips

    • In advanced groups, you may not need to use the prompts and let them freestyle!
    • Some groups prefer more time writing on each prompt - ask them how long they'd like!
    • Using the prompts in the above order is helpful for many groups as it implies a story structure.

    Step 3

    Invite the group to share a short paragraph if they wish. For teaching purposes, try to highlight any moments that particularly demonstrate empathy and animal-like language. 

    Next, debrief with the group. Some suggested debrief topics are:

    • What did you learn?
    • What did it feel like to write as something that wasn't human?
    • What other things might you want to write from the perspective of? 

    Variations

    You can substitute a fox for any animal you choose, so long as you can find a good nature video for inspiration! 

    Background

    I developed this activity while leading workshops for the National Centre for Writing in Norwich, UK. 

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